Monday, November 10, 2014

Sample 2

Stadying for entrance examination such as cherry tree in three seasons”

Today, we are going to write about stady for entrance examination. There are 3 steps that my stadying days. It's like just a cherry tree.

   Autumn comes, red leaves are very beautiful, but many leaves are fallen.
I  studied hard. So, I got many knowledge and confidence. Those motivated me to the next pre test which is the same style of entrance examination. And then,  I took pre test. However, the test was harder than  what I thought, and  I got low score many subject. So, he lose confidence and got depressed.

   It becomes cold, and cherry tree dropped most of the leaves. I troubled. I lost he hope to success in an examination. It was snowing, and the snow fell on my heart. I couldn't get the score in pretext, and my heart had been broken like branches. I had to do my best, but my feeling was very hard. I want to avoid this situation. Then, one of a few friends said to me. "Try again and again!! You must endure it now." These words helped me, and the tree has begun to set up a root. "A little more, a little more. I must endure!!" I said to myself. The time of examination which to enter the university approaches.

    Of cause cherry tree remaind bare a long time, and thare were a lot of hard problems. However it was going to brossom someday.
  In this case, ”someday” was the day annauncement of the entrance examination results.
  I was troubled very much before the day like dead tree. 
  At last, the annauncement day came. I thought I fail certainly. The cherry tree that dream full brossom beautiflly and store powers during fall and winter didn't come out, and the efforts were in vain.
  Then, I heard my friend's voice with joy.
 ”You PASS!” 
”Reary!?”
  I found my seat number, and his voice brought me the worm spring breeze. I was just like full cherry brossom. 
  In Japan, there is a saying, ”SAKURA SAKU,” and it means ”pass the entrance examination.” So, to told the result to my pearent, I mailed this word ”SAKURA SAKU.”

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